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Hi! How are you?
Let’s me tell you about my home . My room is very dirty . And there are many things in the room .
Just like about the old paper , rubbish , my toy…
My bedroom have a bed  . The bed is next to wardborad and than the mug is on the bookshelf .
The bookshelf have books  , mug ang than my toy car is in the cupboard , my money is in the cupboard too . I have the computer is in the bedroom . It’s opposite the bed  . On the night
(my father and mother are sleeping) ,I’ll play the computer . And than on the wall , I have some
postcards .
What about your bedroom? Write to me .
                                                                  Your friend
                                                                    ABC

喂! 你好嗎？讓我們我告訴您關於我的家。我的室是非常骯髒的。並且有許多事在屋子裡。像大約老紙, 垃圾, 我的玩具... 我的臥室有一張床。床比杯子是在書架是在wardborad 旁邊和。書架比我的玩具汽車是在碗櫃, 我的金錢是在碗櫃也是有書, 杯子ang 。我有電腦是在臥室。它是在床對面。在夜(我的父母睡覺), 我將演奏電腦。並且比在牆壁上, 我有一些明信片。怎麼樣您的臥室? 給我寫。您的朋友ABC





Hi! How are you?
Let’s me tell you about my home . My room is very dirty . And there are many things in the room .
Just like about the old paper , rubbish , my toy…
My bedroom have a bed  . The bed is next to wardborad and than the mug is on the bookshelf .
The bookshelf have books  , mug ang than my toy car is in the cupboard , my money is in the cupboard too . I have the computer is in the bedroom . It’s opposite the bed  . On the night
(my father and mother are sleeping) ,I’ll play the computer . And than on the wall , I have some
postcards .
What about your bedroom? Write to me .
                                                                  Your friend
                                                                    ABC



看紅色
Looks red