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chris960629 2008-08-31 17:38

本人的第一篇漫畫-bandit戰記-第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴433p

這篇漫畫很差
但本人一定會把其完成
絕不會放棄
希望大家閱覽一下吧

第一章-脫出












第二章-加入之戰





什麼竟有那麼多人
大哥我回來了
我剛不小心射到他 所以請他回來
好的 那麼請他食飯補償吧
我想問你們為什麼要集合一團
因為我們要擊敗邪鬼

那.....我可以加入你們嗎

可以!但飯後我要一試你的實力


小子來吧!





什麼沒有反應




他的拳很硬
第三章-反擊



















第四章-二打一


























第五章-新的招式




























第六章-入侵者!?
























第七章-追捕的幻影






























































































第八章-新的力量








































































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第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴
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最後希望有一位不會放棄的人
幫一幫我手製作特效(要msn)

廁所為上 2008-08-31 17:45
只好後的一張很型:x
跳了出去的樣子好像在天空跑步:x
令我想起某一套動畫-茶-

chris960629 2008-08-31 18:21
引用第1樓廁所為上於2008-08-31 17:45發表的  :
只好後的一張很型:x
跳了出去的樣子好像在天空跑步:x
令我想起某一套動畫-茶-

那就是
飛翔吧!bandit!
最後一張係捉箭-_-

hinpotato999 2008-08-31 19:31
hinpotato@hotmail
約時間la--

athrun 2008-08-31 19:40
第二張打漏了"好"字
如果bandit一手弄碎技箭會更帥

希乂撒古 2008-08-31 20:00
[email protected]

chris960629 2008-08-31 20:49
引用第4樓athrun於2008-08-31 19:40發表的  :
第二張打漏了"好"字
如果bandit一手弄碎技箭會更帥

碎箭的話要用碎片
很煩的哦

athrun 2008-08-31 20:54
不過可否改回第二張的漏洞?

chris960629 2008-08-31 21:41
引用第7樓athrun於2008-08-31 20:54發表的  :
不過可否改回第二張的漏洞?

對不起
圖己save成bmp
而我自己也沒有備份
真是對不起
ps第二章己完成 上傳中

陸道 2008-08-31 21:48
引用第8樓chris960629於2008-08-31 21:41發表的  :
對不起
圖己save成bmp
而我自己也沒有備份
真是對不起
.......

要改回很容易的啊- -
話說你要製什麼特效@@?
改回了- -對白自已加回吧
找不到樓主用的是什麼字型xD

chris960629 2008-09-01 12:06
引用第9樓陸道於2008-08-31 21:48發表的  :
要改回很容易的啊- -
話說你要製什麼特效@@?
改回了- -對白自已加回吧
找不到樓主用的是什麼字型xD
.......

其實大概是新招等的特效
例儲氣
其實自己也會只是因為做得只是一般
所以先請人幫做
圖我會很快做的了

athrun 2008-09-01 12:20
問題是字被場景遮蔽了,完全看不到寫的是什麼

chris960629 2008-09-01 13:49
引用第11樓athrun於2008-09-01 12:20發表的  :
問題是字被場景遮蔽了,完全看不到寫的是什麼

嗚....
圖就不改但我會加上文字的吧

chris960629 2008-09-01 14:54
更新第三章

希乂撒古 2008-09-01 15:10
引用第10樓chris960629於2008-09-01 12:06發表的  :
其實大概是新招等的特效
例儲氣
其實自己也會只是因為做得只是一般
所以先請人幫做
.......

雖然我不強
但是能盡力幫你

chris960629 2008-09-01 15:23
引用第14樓希乂撒古於2008-09-01 15:10發表的  :
雖然我不強
但是能盡力幫你

好的
MSN己ADD
有需要時會叫你

athrun 2008-09-01 15:45
字太小,看還是很辛苦.漫畫那麼大,要大家看小字?

chris960629 2008-09-01 15:55
引用第16樓athrun於2008-09-01 15:45發表的  :
字太小,看還是很辛苦.漫畫那麼大,要大家看小字?

好的
我會盡量把未拉大

athrun 2008-09-01 15:56
我說的是第二章的輔助字

chris960629 2008-09-01 16:45
引用第18樓athrun於2008-09-01 15:56發表的  :
我說的是第二章的輔助字

好的遲點會改

chris960629 2008-09-01 17:33
更新第四章-二打一!?

廁所為上 2008-09-01 17:37
太可惡...
內容比我精彩
更新幾乎比我還要快
圖片比我還要多...
太可惡...

athrun 2008-09-01 18:24
你參考大家的作品再改便可
致樓主:
我始終不喜歡見到"sm"(之前到wiki看過本義)兩字,可否改成"屈"?
不過特效做得不錯

chris960629 2008-09-01 18:32
引用第22樓athrun於2008-09-01 18:24發表的  :
你參考大家的作品再改便可
致樓主:
我始終不喜歡見到"sm"(之前到wiki看過本義)兩字,可否改成"屈"?
不過特效做得不錯

完成了
特效方面
這次較簡單所以沒有叫幫手做吧

athrun 2008-09-01 18:37
下次可能加上"覺醒"畫面會較好(SEED?)
突然強太多似乎有點離譜

chris960629 2008-09-01 18:53
引用第24樓athrun於2008-09-01 18:37發表的  :
下次可能加上"覺醒"畫面會較好(SEED?)
突然強太多似乎有點離譜

加上了
但這次的特效很一般

athrun 2008-09-01 18:55
試試這樣:
第1幅: 可惡......
第2幅: 是你們......
第3幅: 就是你們...... woody,davis(莫名其妙,表情自改)
第4幅:就是你們這些人...... woody或davis: 什麼?
第5幅:這是你們這些人逼我的!!!!!(爆發)
「うおおおおおおーつ」(我是用來笑的......)
要便加在第五幅爆發圖之後那幅

chris960629 2008-09-01 19:26
引用第26樓athrun於2008-09-01 18:55發表的  :
試試這樣:
第1幅: 可惡......
第2幅: 是你們......
第3幅: 就是你們...... woody,davis(莫名其妙,表情自改)
第4幅:就是你們這些人...... woody或davis: 什麼?
.......

最後一次的了 是嗎?(累........
希望你滿意吧(累死了....

廁所為上 2008-09-01 19:28
爆發的特效很正

athrun 2008-09-01 19:30
是.其實是本人意見來的,不算是不滿意

chris960629 2008-09-01 19:34
引用第29樓athrun於2008-09-01 19:30發表的  :
是.其實是本人意見來的,不算是不滿意

太好了
最少我也要令一位會只不會不滿意吧....

athrun 2008-09-01 19:35
其實因為本人希望精益求精而已(是本人問題)

chris960629 2008-09-01 19:43
引用第31樓athrun於2008-09-01 19:35發表的  :
其實因為本人希望精益求精而已(是本人問題)

沒所謂吧
只有進步才能令人不會落後

chris960629 2008-09-02 16:29
更新第五章-新的招式!? 105p 突破100大關

廁所為上 2008-09-02 16:48
旋轉-_-
令我想起螺旋丸
我記得開頭嗚人也是爆開了

chris960629 2008-09-02 17:18
引用第34樓廁所為上於2008-09-02 16:48發表的  :
旋轉-_-
令我想起螺旋丸
我記得開頭嗚人也是爆開了

大概一樣吧-_-
但特效方面愈來愈差了...

廁所為上 2008-09-02 17:48
螺旋丸我可以幫你做一個:x

chris960629 2008-09-02 18:09
引用第36樓廁所為上於2008-09-02 17:48發表的  :
螺旋丸我可以幫你做一個:x

不用了
我的特效已有方法

chris960629 2008-09-03 19:30
更新第六章-入侵者!?

athrun 2008-09-03 20:49
何時出JUSTIN?太早把十鬥士請出來可能會令故事沒有那麼耐寫(很快寫完)
為何離不開打鬥的?連補充資源之類的機會也沒有

千草 2008-09-10 08:11
有d假~成日都系你逼我的之後就變到好勁咁-v-'

chris960629 2008-09-24 22:12
更新第七章-追捕的幻影 突破200大關

暴走疾風 2008-09-25 11:06
太強了 , 這故事還是好看。

魔法王子 2008-09-25 13:10
個故事好有趣-,-

不過幾好睇

沉默孤者 2008-09-25 15:03
好厲害呀?!您是怎麼改圖的?!招式都帥傻了@@?!

chris960629 2008-09-25 19:48
引用第43樓魔法王子於2008-09-25 13:10發表的  :
個故事好有趣-,-
不過幾好睇

話說
新的那章做特效做的很辛苦:(
特別是那招大炮
簡直改完再改....

chris960629 2008-10-18 22:04
更新第八章-新的力量305p 突破300大關

7088 2008-10-23 22:02
唔知點解好似睇緊h漫咁(講笑咋,唔好打我-_-)
好正:D 唔知最後係暗小b係小b到出黎 光暗小b大戰?!(思想
離題:幾時改萊4:D

leehowa 2008-10-25 09:07
好正啊jack果到= =" 教就教...教埋我^^

絕望吧 2008-10-25 13:12
加油
上傳都上傳死


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