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[自創漫畫]本人的第一篇漫畫-bandit戰記-第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴433p [複製鏈接]

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這篇漫畫很差
但本人一定會把其完成
絕不會放棄
希望大家閱覽一下吧

第一章-脫出












第二章-加入之戰





什麼竟有那麼多人
大哥我回來了
我剛不小心射到他 所以請他回來
好的 那麼請他食飯補償吧
我想問你們為什麼要集合一團
因為我們要擊敗邪鬼

那.....我可以加入你們嗎

可以!但飯後我要一試你的實力


小子來吧!





什麼沒有反應




他的拳很硬
第三章-反擊



















第四章-二打一


























第五章-新的招式




























第六章-入侵者!?
























第七章-追捕的幻影






























































































第八章-新的力量








































































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第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴
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最後希望有一位不會放棄的人
幫一幫我手製作特效(要msn)
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好多新招呀,,,好正,,!!*

收既pm我傾,只限peak/bank
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有d部份幾似lfo同火影(迪雲教佢果招係螺旋丸?)入面既故事情節
但都好好睇!
+油
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就讓我,
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樓主 +油 好好睇
收失樂的雷鳴 意pm我
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好好睇喔樓主,
故事不但精彩,而且很有趣
支持樓主!
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好正呀!!!快D整落去
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喂 原來好快咁拉落墁睇會好好睇 好似動畫
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引用第56樓chris960629於2008-12-03 21:12發表的  :
第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴
這章有點亂
因舊的上傳ac爆了
只好用新ac

那會post來這個帖嗎?
p.s:比我作落去啦~
悟地除了力量外 還有戰術↓!!
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第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴
這章有點亂
因舊的上傳ac爆了
只好用新ac
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很好看,我會一直支持下去的
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招式越來越華麗
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引用第52樓tommychow321於2008-12-01 19:53發表的  :
沒錯!!
p.s:樓主你不錯了嗎 [表情]
我想幫你作呀!!!
上樓的意見是幾好
但似乎太麻煩了- -
.......

第九章因有127p那麼多
所以上傳有點問題
現在調整一下
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沒錯!!
p.s:樓主你不作了嗎
我想幫你作呀!!!
上樓的意見是幾好
但似乎太麻煩了- -
打完又有龐士
跟住仲有上帝之手- -
但都不失為一個好辦法~
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悟地除了力量外 還有戰術↓!!
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真係做得好好
令到我想睇落去
希望你會不斷咁整
無了期>w<
好似lfo咁
打完邪鬼又有個龐士
打完佢又有上帝之手
加油呀!
我支持你
本人玩PEAK的:D
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加油!!!
我等著你作新的!!!
p.s:可以比我作嗎- -
悟地除了力量外 還有戰術↓!!
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加油
上傳都上傳死
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好正啊jack果到= =" 教就教...教埋我^^
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唔知點解好似睇緊h漫咁(講笑咋,唔好打我-_-)
好正:D 唔知最後係暗小b係小b到出黎 光暗小b大戰?!(思想
離題:幾時改萊4:D
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更新第八章-新的力量305p 突破300大關
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引用第43樓魔法王子於2008-09-25 13:10發表的  :
個故事好有趣-,-
不過幾好睇

話說
新的那章做特效做的很辛苦:(
特別是那招大炮
簡直改完再改....
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