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[自創漫畫]本人的第一篇漫畫-bandit戰記-第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴433p [複製鏈接]

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這篇漫畫很差
但本人一定會把其完成
絕不會放棄
希望大家閱覽一下吧

第一章-脫出












第二章-加入之戰





什麼竟有那麼多人
大哥我回來了
我剛不小心射到他 所以請他回來
好的 那麼請他食飯補償吧
我想問你們為什麼要集合一團
因為我們要擊敗邪鬼

那.....我可以加入你們嗎

可以!但飯後我要一試你的實力


小子來吧!





什麼沒有反應




他的拳很硬
第三章-反擊



















第四章-二打一


























第五章-新的招式




























第六章-入侵者!?
























第七章-追捕的幻影






























































































第八章-新的力量








































































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第九章-同伴死去,新的同伴
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最後希望有一位不會放棄的人
幫一幫我手製作特效(要msn)
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只好後的一張很型:x
跳了出去的樣子好像在天空跑步:x
令我想起某一套動畫-茶-
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只好後的一張很型:x
跳了出去的樣子好像在天空跑步:x
令我想起某一套動畫-茶-

那就是
飛翔吧!bandit!
最後一張係捉箭-_-
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第二張打漏了"好"字
如果bandit一手弄碎技箭會更帥

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第二張打漏了"好"字
如果bandit一手弄碎技箭會更帥

碎箭的話要用碎片
很煩的哦
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不過可否改回第二張的漏洞?

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不過可否改回第二張的漏洞?

對不起
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而我自己也沒有備份
真是對不起
ps第二章己完成 上傳中
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對不起
圖己save成bmp
而我自己也沒有備份
真是對不起
.......

要改回很容易的啊- -
話說你要製什麼特效@@?
改回了- -對白自已加回吧
找不到樓主用的是什麼字型xD
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要改回很容易的啊- -
話說你要製什麼特效@@?
改回了- -對白自已加回吧
找不到樓主用的是什麼字型xD
.......

其實大概是新招等的特效
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其實自己也會只是因為做得只是一般
所以先請人幫做
圖我會很快做的了
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問題是字被場景遮蔽了,完全看不到寫的是什麼

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問題是字被場景遮蔽了,完全看不到寫的是什麼

嗚....
圖就不改但我會加上文字的吧
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更新第三章
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其實大概是新招等的特效
例儲氣
其實自己也會只是因為做得只是一般
所以先請人幫做
.......

雖然我不強
但是能盡力幫你
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雖然我不強
但是能盡力幫你

好的
MSN己ADD
有需要時會叫你
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字太小,看還是很辛苦.漫畫那麼大,要大家看小字?

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字太小,看還是很辛苦.漫畫那麼大,要大家看小字?

好的
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我說的是第二章的輔助字

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引用第18樓athrun於2008-09-01 15:56發表的  :
我說的是第二章的輔助字

好的遲點會改
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