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This book is about Benny,he always thoughtthat he is the best and best at everything.He needed to go to camp and he thinks that he could handle anything.But he could not pact up his bag himself.He thought he was also the best camper.He and others camper arrived the campsite and played somethings.Benny do not listened to the instructor and went on the sail boat.He tipped over th boat.They went to the wood shop and built birdhouses.He needed to stick the wood but he made his hand sticky by glue.He went fishing but he only get a old boot.He playeds tennis but he lost all the tennis balls.He is sad because he is not the best camper.At last They went hiking and straied. Benny helped them to go out the forest and he was the best camper!

This book is about Benny,he always thought that [he is the best and best at everything.]<-??He had to go to camp and he thought that he could handle everything.But he could not pack up his own belongings by himself. He thought he was the best camper as well.He and other campers arrived the campsite and [playedsomething]<-???.Benny did not follow the instructions given by the instructor and went onto the sailing boat.He tipped over the boat.[They went to the wood shop and built birdhouses.]<-??? He had to stick the wood together but his hand was stuck by the glue.He went fishing but he could get an old boot only.He played tennis but he lost all the tennis balls. He is sad because he is not the best camper. At last, they went hiking and [straied]<-??. [Benny helped them to go out the forest and he was the best camper!]<-???

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引用第1樓bon1於2009-01-18 18:03發表的 :
This book is about Benny,he always thought that [he is the best and best at everything.]<-??He had to go to camp and he thought that he could handle everything.But he could not pack up his own belongings by himself. He thought he was the best camper as well.He and other campers arrived the campsite and [playedsomething]<-???.Benny did not follow the instructions given by the instructor and went onto the sailing boat.He tipped over the boat.[They went to the wood shop and built birdhouses.]<-??? He had to stick the wood together but his hand was stuck by the glue.He went fishing but he could get an old boot only.He played tennis but he lost all the tennis balls. He is sad because he is not the best camper. At last, they went hiking and [straied]<-??. [Benny helped them to go out the forest and he was the best camper!]<-???

Use present tense- -?

講書係用現在式的嗎?>??

引用第4樓↗滅絕↖於2009-01-19 19:56發表的  :
講書係用現在式的嗎?>??

經歷可以用past tense-,-?

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